Of all that is

Never let things pass you by

Delve into this contented ocean of silver words

Speak of all that is prosperous for it was and would be

 

Sink into released forms of loving this life

For my introverted heart spoke of this golden path

 

We would engrave tenacious happiness 

Often placid sand would wonder so volatile 

 

Living between those secluded groves  

Sentimental promises of primitive waves

 

Piled upon the dark sidewalk of this heart

Park yourself a pleasant thought within reality

 

For the beauty of this gifted morning air

Would seldom wait for any form of obscured passion

 

Dreams would resolutely part phobic with timid tides

Soaking the breaking point of inducted solitude

 

We drown within shadows of beauty fleeing 

Of all the plans wilting in rosy water

 

Life calls out upon the abided blue docks

As consumed pigeons would deliver lost letters

 

Proclaiming it really is the opportune time

Trains of reality placed by this serendipitous foaming bay

Author's Note

Sometimes one can't wait
and should go for what they want .......

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Yes indeed of all that is, don’t let go for the moment will be lost forever.

[B]

Yes
Thank you Andrew

[Justin]

that was very good, it was very creative and sent a powerful message!!!!

[B]

Thank you Justin
Cute dog

[Justin]

your welcome, if u get time, please look at my writing, I wish it is my dog lol, thanks :) :) :)

[George Coombs]

Excellent thought provoking writing. For me a lovely celebration of the present moment and of clear seeing where reality and dreams can meet together and eben embrace each other. A lovely well chosen image, great work.

[B]

Thank you so much

[George Coombs]

Your welcome

[An owl on the moon]

Your words dance so tenderly between the forms of reality and the wonders of dreams, awakening a world where both collide. May we all find these stirring moments of the soul where we are fully alive in the moment of every breath. Beautifully voiced.

[B]

Thank you so much

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Beautiful! Never miss an opportunity. Beautifully penned piece! Keep em flowing

[B]

Thank you dear

[Darling]

I love the flow of this piece. Love how you use works that make it come alive.

[B]

Thank you so much

[LylaCrystal]

"For my introverted heart spoke of this golden path". This verse made me realise that writing is the golden path for you. Keep writing and sharing your amazing work to the world. :)

~Lyla

[B]

I am very humbled by your kindness
Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and wonderful use of words. I liked how you use the description. You mad the reader feel and understand the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thank you Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Grasping the moment in time and space in a poetic interpretation of ‘passion’ embraced – exquisite! :-)

[B]

Thank you so much Phil

[z.chéri]

Lovely!
I really like the title too.
Keep writing! x

[B]

Thank you very much