Vessels of Life

Unlike the form of solid splice 

Happenings arrive in cold ripples

Spending time within a sparing vasteness

Parting through a strange red sound

Unlike the endless places of toned purple

A love that belongs to more than a soul

Living beyond halos of glowing white light

Neatly whispered to the dawning crimson winds

Kindness within the face of dewy life

Stories written to the midnight sorting star

In rememberance of the legends that slowly fall

Whistles of the past lives belonging to the night

Drowning away the steerings of fear misplaced

Hours would fleet within this ticking timely road

Unknowningly the signs would seem futile in a sea

Of all the words uttered upon water

Sleeping to vessels of life 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your thoughts are so transcendent. They carry us across our endless lifetimes, beyond the barren forms of flesh, love and life deeper than the breath of this world and into the ageless life of the universe. Extraordinary.

[B]

Thank you so much
Smiling here

[An owl on the moon]

Good. Smiles light the world.

[Nicholas Shea]

This is such a beautifully rich poem, dripping with color and depth. Wonderful.

[B]

Thank you Nicholas
how very generous of you .....

[keith]

an interesting verse using metaphor quite well
the life blood flows taking in all that embraces causing the reader to give serious thought to your message
thank you

[B]

Thank you very much for your review