Lucent

Seconds flown out of bright pink 

As motion would engulf this sense

Beauty has overtaken a new

Bright blue in whispered prayers

Pure in white circling a place of mercy

Chanting words of divnity

Oud infusing the air of black

As tears would fall in relief

In count the white dove would escape

Holding messages within 

The pot of life resting in space

Stars would read a verse

Oh your moon shines little

In presence of your light

Lucent motions of lakes

In a dry cave of Arabia

Scents would stain the heart

As views so fluid as stars

A black veil would sing to the wind

As journeys would end too soon 

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

This is rather deep. I'm not sure if this is the beginning of life. The journey through life. Finally ending in death. Are you getting darker.

[B]

I am not sure.
It all depends on what happens next
I can't see the next step
But I have strong faith

Thank you Paul

[Paul Bell]

Nothing wrong with faith. Gets you through the tough times.

[B]

It does so
And it keeps one sane

[Einstein Noodle]

enjoyed the read ...lots of stimulating lines, ideas, images, moods and scenes ... a collage that brings comfort to my heart
E.

[B]

Glad you say that
pay it forward

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .................. pay it forward ..... hmmmmmmmmmm i will try my friend ... i will try my best! ;)

[B]

i will visit all your work right now :)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................