No Inhibitions

If it could be spoken

Ropes attaching hope ties to life

You are the pink requiem 

The greatness of morning haze of purity

If one word would hold you

The shades of simple beauty in grey

Surrounding your warm being 

There exists a gentle place 

Romanticizing yet another substance 

The air of thirst to those eyes

Reviews

[Geo Lawrence]

Powerful strings of metaphors.
An apt display of your artistic mind.
Good Job.

[B]

Thank you very much for your support

[An owl on the moon]

Your thoughts breathe a certain enchantment over the world's existence. Beautiful shades on every soft petal of life and a joy to read, again and again.

[B]

Thank you so much for your review

[An owl on the moon]

Always a joy.

[Dave]

Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder. That gentle place can come in a wide range of colors or simply monochromatic shades of grey. I like this very much.

[B]

Thank you so much Dave

[Tom]

High appraisal and testimony to a love serene !

Beautifully penned!

[B]

Thank you Tom

[H.L. Cerveise]

I love the picture with the poem. Your line "shades of simple beauty in grey" I love how it shows we don't need vibrant colors to see beauty. It is in the shades of life we should take solace.

Well Done!

[B]

Thank you so much H.L.
That is true

[Paul Bell]

This feels like an open letter to a loved one.
Like the gentle breeze feel to it.

[B]

Thanks Paul

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of a writer on this site...she is the epitome of gentleness and kindness...

i like the "pink requiem" line very much...
j.

[B]

Thank you J so sweet