Turquoise Brace

Bright blue shade though green in substance

Eluding to another form of blaring rays

Water wavering a thought of another found light

Unaware of the swaying air that learns

Exceptions that no longer cared

For once pleased audience in a realm of stars

A language of solace uttering to speak

Masking echoes of mahogany sheets

A dance of peace may glide through

Reality assured in blue

Unarmoured forms of understanding

Kindles of life to be

An antidote to seas of being 

Demanding clarity of breeze

Scribbles on water

Addressing the unknown

For as long as serenity may hover

Tonight would bring a fleeting tomorrow

Untied anchors in riddled rhyme

A Boat floating in guidance

Purple midnight stars 

Unchaining melodies hidden

Written through white lucency

Songs in valiant arc

A passing tenderness

Upon tresses 

Author's Note

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Once again the poet has gifted us with multiple couples which have no seeming connection. The cumulative meaning is hard to tell, but many of the lines hint of romance.

[Ian Chris]

Turquoise Brace.
Fantastic picture and a wonderful use of words.
Ian Chris

[B]

Thanks Ian

[apennylate]

This time... Song was second... Your syllable control and tone on this one were impeccably shaped...
Last three hit me, as well as first... The mahogany sheets... Elusive a passing tenderness... Tresses...

[B]

Thank you so much

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully expressed ;-]

[B]

Thank you for your review

[barleygirl]

This is awesome free verse. Sometimes those writing free verse do not appreciate that one must still be a word crafter as you have shown yourself to be in strong measure! I love the ongoing imagery connected with the blue-green color spectrum, the floating/playing sensations of being underwater, & just great attention to word sounds like alliteration & much more (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[B]

Wow
Thanks barley

[Dara]

Your poem is profound and has a certain calmness to it. You paint such lovely images with your words. I believe they represent a soul who has experienced much in life yet has come through wiser and at peace with oneself. It is hard for me to find just the right words but the feelings that come over me are deep.

[B]

Waw
you read me so well !!

[Dara]

It is what draws us poets together :-) Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts.

[B]

Thank you
I am humbled :)

[Pete]

love it. amazing color that turquoise and you do it justice. outstanding, top-notch stuff. so very cool. can take so much from this. pic, title, wording so smooth with great flow as it takes me away to another place. so many memorable lines and images. like a different dimension ... :)

Exceptions that no longer cared

[B]

What do you see though?!

[Pete]

i see a soul that has made it through some things of life - a strong survivor at peace with self by focusing on the love that transcends through nature. staying positive in the light and beauty rather than the dark ... :)

[B]

Waw
It seems I am somewhat well read on this one
Thanks pete

[Hiraeth]

wow, this piece is borderline reality and illusion, I fell in love with it. I don't know how am I supposed to feel.

[B]

lol
i do that apparently
thank you