Seas in Cobalt

The ode to unwritten consensus

Serenades of read impermanent time 

Impressement of kingly thrones

A celestial body of air pines obscurity

Yonder plateau of ranges

An occluding rush of character

Unruffled transiting bubbles to space

Apprehensions rim a milky way 

Abridge suppliant yearned fancy

Perspiring amorous waters of sluice

Rising on the heaves like stars

Seafarer saves me an occult position

Responsive wayfaring planetarium 

Emigrating visitations to ward disquietude 

Store into a freer print 

As angelic children lift each other

Songs of a succor guitar

A highborn progeny

Elan vital do be solace

If dayspring refulgent shall find

A terrace of stipule 

Treasures scintillaed

Dreamer of obligated red veil

Author's Note

I love you

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

another lovely write, do i need to say anymore

[B]

I am on the seventh sky
:)

[duff]

This is another killer piece. I'm really enjoying reading your work. The best way I could describe your imagery would be hypnotic. The vocab and flow are sick.

"The ode to unwritten consensus
Serenades of read impermanent time"

Beautiful line and awesome job.

[B]

Thank you Duff
Loving the attention by the way

[duff]

You are very welcome. Anytime

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the choice of vocabulary---i read third line as "thrones"---i think of the Go West song..
"and i'm the king of wishful thinking"---

what we want to be, and what we are...usually two entirely different things.

j.

[B]

I love that song
I guess yeah
but we can make things we imagine come to life
Thanks J

[Hiraeth]

You wrote comments on my writing,= that wind blew me to you profile and I read some of your writings. You have an amazing talent, please never stop writing.

[B]

Thank you
I am a bit weird i know

[Hiraeth]

no it's not weird at all. I would never have found your writings if you did not make the first move. thanks. :)