Theories of envelopment

Of the coarsest exterior

To Pines and sharp needles

A most supple existence 

Pricking its outsider

Remaining angelic white

Protecting its rights 

To be pure

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

people get made fun of for that purity thing, but most important to be true to oneself...no matter what the rest are doing....
j.

[B]

Yes
Thank you J

[Einstein Noodle]

ooooooooooooooooooo a thinking persons poem ... so impressed with the idea of envelopment as protecting its rights ... in line 1 do you mean coarsest?
being a little prickly is a fine thing...our inner hearts being precious and deserve our protecting them ... i really like this poem ma'am! wonderful thought behind it!
E.

[B]

Oooppps you caught my typo lol

Thank you so much wonderful E