Gleaming Morning

This one is for you Mrs. Pauline

Birds decide to fly in by the pole

Mapping a path of timid hearts

Scintillations wave through 

For every moment of spoken silence

Brings about the gleaming morning

Radiance by white skin

Silent prayer placed at once

Hands join to feel ideas of life

Effulgence of age 

Will there be diverese flickers

Only one morning would emotions rise

Splendor angel 

As we gather towards love 

Innately worn on morning sleeves

Wealthy is your heart

The rather warmth of a sweet woman

Wise in her ways she cares

A bounteous presence

Upon the rising sun i wish life

Roses of pink upon rivers of blue 

Sensing solicitude

Your idea of giving is my admiration

Soft curls covering your kind eyes

A ray of dreams

As skirts gather a perfumed thought

This was a vision i wished to see

A moment of giving inspiration

As open as your heart has been

I love you through a gleaming morning

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

soft and gentle tribute to someone who shares love ...i didn't read any selfishness in this at all...no pain ..just admiration and caring ... i should stop reading for the day right here ..and keep my lift up received ;) i have to say that these lines are especially fine to me:
"our idea of giving is my admiration
Soft curls covering your kind eyes"
E.

[B]

She is quite a pleasant person
i guess i never really stood so close to her before
and it just dawned on me
Thank you E

[Einstein Noodle]

so beautiful ...a lost treasure to have missed noticing eh!?

[Stacy Purvis]

I enjoyed your format, immensely.
The flow was smooth, rhythm was just right, the message, valuable.

[B]

Thank you A
Thats quite a nice review

[WillaDanvers]

Beautifully written, and the story behind is fantastic. Another great piece from you!

[B]

Thank you so much

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute of love

[B]

Thank you Wordman

[duff]

I really like your choices for imagery. It's rich and is an enhancement for the reader to absorb the setting.

"Mapping a path of timid hearts"
There are a lot of great lines but I kept coming back to this one. Definitely like this.

[B]

She is a rich woman
Thank you Duff

[duff]

You are very welcome:)

[Mr.Writer]

Beautiful, delicate and graceful poem!
The choice of words you use are fantastic and easy to understand!
"Upon the rising sun i wish life
Roses of pink upon rivers of blue"
Refreshing and amazing poem!
Keep it up

[B]

Thank you monsieur

[Mr.Writer]

No problem!

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's really nice, enjoyed the read a very good poem

[B]

Thank you Dear Farhan