His

His

A Poem by B

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Upon the whirlpools of transcending knowledge
The moon there stood within entwined times

Refining the rendered landscape 

Of all the shooting stars of shadowy hope
The galaxy daisy spread accross flute sound

Dreamboat set to visit this valley

The moment of peace floating through
Leaving so much to learn without speech

A harmonious pride of righteous space

Having known the rushing clue within blue 
Gardens recreated longing to grow

Voiceless promises of care resonnates

A white rose stood in placement 
Kneeling to the shinning sun found

Credentials written on running waters

Touched by the innocence of a voice
Upon the rays of awakened literature

The scent of your presence

Water ways found roots to love
A place for it's givings to be received 

Cream white semblance within your arms

Questioning if you had found me
Or was it me searching for you

Sprouting the edge of life in finer air

Exchanging greenery for golden braces
If the light shall fall through us just the same

This island universe of yours

You would remain within for another year
A reasoning emotion building the stars 

Building a port to the heavens

We would recite the letters of a bird
Floating a white rose on an ocean of reality

A protroyal of your deep longing 

Waving the flutter butterfly's wing 
Yielding another day in toned earth 

Delaying our sense for joy
She would kiss your eyes as she closed her palms

The hideaway

For the pond sits just below
A white rose

© 2019 B


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Beautiful poem, I love this piece a lot.
thanks for sharing!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thank you Amy
Amy R

7 Years Ago

my pleasure
Your word choice, meter, succinct portrayal of fine lines with heavenly rhymes... Heh... I just really love your writing, and this was no exception... The letters of a bird hidden away in white snow... Like a rose... Superbly penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thank you Silente
enchanting enchanting enchanting, reads like a beautiful fairytale.

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thank you Thank you Thank you
andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

my pleasure, pleasure, pleasure.
Aloha, gorgeous poetry. I love the image of a rose kneeling to the sun. Like hearts leaning into each other. Love really does grow like that. Izzy

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

It does indeed
thank you so much
i love your pic ..... you are so beautiful
Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Oh :) Mahalo that's kind of you to say
regardless of who started out searching, two hearts meant to be together, grow toward each other, find the same garden eventually, and find themselves intertwined in the garden of love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

ooh my
thank you Jacob
A amazing poem written. I like the places and the thoughts in the words. Life, beauty and places are gathered for us to know. Life is okay. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thank you C
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

This is poetry my friend and you are welcome.
love all the metaphors,you painted a lovely image

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thank you Wordman
Beautifully described!! I was hooked into the poem...
"For the pond sits just below
A white rose"
So delicate and crisp lines...
Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

No problem :)
B

7 Years Ago

Lol
I see
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Hmm, what do you mean lol

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