Written Rose

In every corner of an innocent thought

There resting upon hands

Something delicate unwritten

Remaining within 

Turning timidly to look the other way

An eternal soul naked 

Running into white rains 

Soulful forgiveness

One voice once more

Written on a rose 

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

Love and sweetness with soft tone..i really love this one

[B]

Thank you ..... :)

[yuhee]

soft and delicate yet full of thoughts. wonderful poem.

[B]

Thank you MP ......

[wordman]

a sweet poem of love,enjoyed

[B]

thank you wordman

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft, powerful and wonderful use of words and thoughts. I felt the honest tone in the words leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed this one.

[Mr.Writer]

So delicate, beautiful and sophisticated....
Amazing!
I enjoyed :)

[B]

Thank you so much

[SleeplessVolcano]

Beautiful words, striking image. The writer's words sought the audience of a loved one, and it seems that it found what it was looking for

[B]

Thanks SV .................

[Dave]

How tenderly you tell of your love. Knowing that all of it captures the essence of your being. You are exposed, naked in the rain running and seeking forgiveness. So short, so sweet, so powerful.
Thank you.

[B]

Thank you Dave

[Ana B.]

What a tender exhale of emotions. Mesmerizing picture dear author.

[B]

Thank you Ana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and those roses become poems, blooming on parchment.

j.

[B]

You complete my work
Thank you Jacob :)