Written Rose

In every corner of an innocent thought

There resting upon hands

Something delicate unwritten

Remaining within 

Turning timidly to look the other way

An eternal soul naked 

Running into white rains 

Soulful forgiveness

One voice once more

Written on a rose 

Reviews

[apennylate]

Eternally my soul stays naked under white rains of forgiveness... Roses and delicate prose... Stunningly penned...

[B]

Thank you so much :)

[apennylate]

You are so welcome...!

[Paul Bell]

Quite mysterious this poem. Could be someone dead. But could also be a secret lover. Hope it's the secret lover.

[B]

no one died in the production of this work of art
lol .... you make me laugh now you

[Amy R]

I definitely love this poem.
Beautifully written :)

[B]

Thank you Amy

[Amy R]

ur welcome

[Einstein Noodle]

be in love with me....won't you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeze! ;) exquisite and so comforting with tender love ...a piece of God's love to be shared .. into my library .. you've brought the stars in your eyes into your heart looking at them so long ... can i say i love this poem! straight from strong , honest emotions ..tho words do fail ..this is as close as it gets says i!
E.
ps i rarely give points (not sure what it is for) but had to give them all to you for this one!

[B]

Lol E you are adorable
Thank you so much

[WillaDanvers]

This is so beautiful, fragile and yet so intense. Loving the delicacy of the words, and the soft and sweet story lying within. One of my favourite pieces :D

[B]

Thank you so much

[Jesus0996]

Great job. I enjoyed reading this poem.

[B]

Thank you J

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, this is so beautiful very soft and delicate words almost fragile. Izzy

[B]

Thank you Izzy

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Sigh... this is beautiful. Definitely partial to roses

[B]

Thank you R

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've always considered roses to be the sweetest form of endearment. This holds such grace and eloquence!

[B]

Thank you Kelly
Means alot coming from you

[mae23]

So beautiful! The soft timid tone is welcoming and endearing

[B]

Thank you Mae