A Magical Tree

Standing there above a realm

Extending fruits ever glowing

Emerald green through teal 

Masked in rainbows awfully still

Leaves intending to disperse hope

Tanned biscuit taupe

Roots grounded on earthly warmth

Time has dwindled on its yearnings

For good it relishes in enjoyment

It earns the makings of a king

Showering wishes for the weak

Well-kept cloaks always neat

Shaded under it's peeled gratitude

Only meant one more night of serene cold

The polar emotions left untold

Veins of water to ease your heart

Centered within it's own right 

The altruist essence of existence

It sleeps by morning in seeds of grey

Wakes at midnight for a simple prayer

The donor of advocacy 

To make sense of it's circles would be insane

Yet you riddle along for one more day

A parachment abiding to human seekings

Lost is not a man through it's shield

Fighting no one and living in no fear 

Restful and wise it stands bearer to the wind

The nubilous granting solitude for the lost 

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, honestly I enjoyed every word of this. Very smooth flowing read and a kind of mystical imagery Overall this felt like a meditation of sorts incredibly relaxing/holistic. Izzy

[B]

Thank you so much for this wonderful review

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome

[apennylate]

... Wow, Stars, this was... Incredible...

*The altruist essence of existence*

Captivating line, as well as magical ride type emotion... Lost shields, nubilous solitude... Polar emotion... I really adored this one, and the smooth, glass-water feel to it is perfect for the flow... Lack of punctuation adds to the serene feel, and the spaced lines make it almost ethereal... Masterfully penned... Seriously...

[B]

Well thank you veyr much Silente !!

[B]

sorry very lol

[Mel Jayne]

Interesting and captivating read. I found this poem incredibly relaxing, I hope that is what you were going for. I like the imagery you used like 'veins of water', it''s quite serene. I would only critique the lack of punctuation but if you want it to read this way then who am I to stop you. It just took me out a bit when I had to think about how it should be read.i like the mystical aesthetic that you have created through your words.

[B]

Thank you Mel
and yeah i do need to pay attention to the punctuation
I will be working on that
Thanks