Only for the Softest of Hearts

To the shore the wave remains

The utlimate enemy of sand

Coming through with speeding hands

Pulling away the rigid lines

Unbelieving a nature too solid

It seeks a much needed fluidity

If for the bare eyes

More is to be observed of the scene

As timid waves thinking from the farthest distance

Riding the sea for months to years

Only to be overwhelmed with heart 

Emotions plead not guilty 

As the observing sun shines gentle rays

The shore stands the chance of another day 

Blueness rushes to it's aid reflecting a well known sky

Whispering to it's waters we are both but one

Sand disspates in the presenence of such love

Receding closer to a much held purpose

Until an innocent child piles a castle 

Closer to the waves' hunger 

fearless

She places hope upon the shoreline

Taking pictures of her heart

The much wiser sea now only knows 

To see thrashing waves coming through 

in lighter view

Forming foam like images playfully placid

As the sand embraces a much anticipated arrival

Until both form a world of blue 

Mingled with hints of white 

Never to forget a touch of gold

Through love and compassion

Expecting goodwill of it's certain presence

For a much distant wave rushes 

As children carry buckets of sand

Building hope out of laughter 

A view only for the softest of hearts

Welcoming the idea of better chances 

Leaving only one form of insanity

That of imagined ill will 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and amazing use of words and thoughts. I loved the artwork and the use of description. You took me with you to places and thoughts. Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thank you so much C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[wordman]

such a lovely view you have painted

[B]

Thank you Wordman

[KWP]

I'm not so sure the waves and the sand are enemies ... I think they like to flirt with each other, have a bit of rough and tumble ... they are both part of nature, the biggest force ... that's our greatest mistake you know, humans separating themselves from the wholeness of nature. Silly us!

I can see what you are trying to portray here and I beleive if you cut the poem in half and refine it here and there your message could come through loud and clear XXX

[B]

Thank you So much

[Mel Jayne]

Cool poem it's very emotive and enchanting. A tad dark but that's not really a bad thing. You've really captured emotions and displayed them truthfully. You are very talented.

[B]

Thank you so much Mel

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wonderful piece of work,
Very good poem to read I enjoyed it

[B]

thank you .......