Moment

We will whisper words 

Into each other's ears

One day

While creating the idea of love

When i see you 

Words come to visit

Along with endless song

Humming the tune of you

I look at you as you talk

My heart flutters in pure joy

I finally saw heaven on earth

As you look up

I look down

You are the perfect melody

Flying upon my poor torn heart

All those shattered pieces

Come off the ground 

Gathering space in my chest

Picking up pace 

I can't breathe 

I never felt this full before

The world was never this perfect place

Until this moment 

Something meant to be framed

The entire world should stop

Taking witness of this beautiful god creation

Talking, walking this morning

Butterflies fill this field 

As my head gets dizzy

All i hear is your voice

Through music and child's play

Heaven descended to this earth

As an angel formed

You are all i want

All i ever dreamed of

The world is not big enough

To carry this moment 

The things we exchange in total silence

Reviews

[JT Godin]

Quite good, positive message, good imagery.

[B]

Thanks Thomase

[B]

Pardon Thomas :)

[wordman]

you have expressed your feelings so clear,great write

[B]

Thank you Wordman

[Tina H.W.]

So true of someone so deeply in love. This is a wonderful poem! :)

[B]

Merci beaucoup !!!

[Tina H.W.]

De rien!!! :)

[Miri Grace]

Absolutely lovely. The feeling conveyed by this poem is something I have felt in the past so deeply that it touched me in a personal way. There is beautifully crafted figurative and descriptive language that I really appreciated. Quite brilliant!!

[B]

Thank you Grace

[Mr.Writer]

Awe... this is so sweet!
"As an angel formed
You are all i want"
This line was soo cute and delicate!
Keep it up! :)
I love your work!

[B]

Thank you
:)