Circle of White Haze

The curtain falls pearly pull

Pictures of the perfect escape

A solitude filled space 

Raising arms high to this sky

Internally hugging the crescent tone 

Soft resting on this imaginary line

The only temperature ever known

Speaking softly of yet another day

Waves move into dry lands of June

Pondering the colors of this lake

Dipping words in inks of brightness

Smile into lucky afternoons

Heart so vast hosting the stranger

As the instrument plays white haze

Away into quiet entrance

Slowly leaves the room

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Just beautiful! The imagery and prose together make for an entrancing few moments. Amazing share, keep it up!

[B]

Thank you so much for your support

[Paul Bell]

Like the relaxed style of this. The days like the years always change. I suppose just like life. Good luck in the contest.

[B]

Thanks Paul :)

[Ken Simm.]

Subtle and visual as well as being atmospheric to the nth degree. All that the reader could want.

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Thank you Ken

[Einstein Noodle]

i draw the shade and i am alone ..i go inside and find a world changing already from spring to summer .. and a place of comfort .. the haze a welcome thing .. and then, almost sadly, the journey ends .. one must return to the other real world ;) loved the experience your poem gives me this morning ...thanks for sharing
E.

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Thank you Dear E

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This works albeit a little random. Some lovely phrases and original description.

[B]

Thank you John

[wordman]

a beautiful painting of life,almost like i`m there

[B]

Thank you Wordman

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Tina H.W.]

Your poems are so calming! Honestly, they're like a soft breeze on a scorcher of a day. This is beautiful! :)

[B]

Thank you so much Tina

[Tina H.W.]

Your poems are always a pleasure to read :)

[Robert Wallace]

Yes I am now a fan. Really good balance of imagery and pace and narration and concept all at the same time...hmmm...How can write like this?

[B]

lol Stay as long as you want
Thank you Robert .... it just comes out of nowhere for me and then goes

[Robert Wallace]

I have a reply in written word. Let me know if you enjoy my short poem...Why Poetry?

[B]

I don't follow sorry
Poetry is my thing i guess
i dont know

[Mr.Writer]

Very dreamy! Great job! I like this one!

[B]

Thank you Mr. Writer

[Mr.Writer]

No problem!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good choice to write and also what u written in it..your words n all wonderful

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Thank you Farhan