The Calm

The Calm

A Poem by B
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When raging winds roar
Upon a million starry shores

After the solemn pair drifts away
Touching sands of white all remains

Through her soft hair the rhythm goes
A place of no drugs floats through

While a seeing eye presumes too much
Some calm seems to visit this temple

A soul accepting tears of the sun
Relaying the paradise of this mind

Another way to life mediates the tide
To welcome all the ravishing fruit

Kind in it's giving color it may fly
Holding a prayer for mercy upon his soul

A coconut recline in his beautiful eyes
Kissing away the tears to a Tahiti

She is the summering hour taking a stroll
Left if the egoistic tick of time 

Beyond the strings of wooden oak 
Behind the fluttering toes sand dilates 

Away you go into her peace
Calming the tame of regular sight  

© 2017 B


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Oh I love this one very much it's peaceful and soothing. I even enjoyed the description at the start lol

Posted 7 Years Ago


Can I copy and take this poem to read in the middle of London at the height of tourist season, please? This really is The Calm. I can feel the tranquillity as I read. It's very beautiful and indeed calming. I also love the deserted beach scene which accompanies it. Really beautiful. Thank you for sharing a little piece of calm in our hectic lives. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Please do
Enjoy lol
You've described paradise. A place I wouldn't mind spending some time in. :)



Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thank you Relic :)
Wow....I wanna go there...any direct flights? :)
Oh what bliss when that temple of peace
Can offer release to worn out souls.
Dripping with organically grown honey, this one :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Its a place of the mind
Thank you SV
SleeplessVolcano

7 Years Ago

Mind over matter, they say eh? :)
B

7 Years Ago

always ............ no doubt
Amazing use of words. You took me to a better place my friend. The good description create perfect places and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much C
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Ahhh … truly an ‘archipelago’ of creative poetic prose! Loved the imagery painted within the text and the ‘ebb/flow of the stanzas. Very good write – just one note – should line 13 read: ‘Kind in its (not it's) giving colors it may fly’? Peace ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

Thanks i will fix it

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