The Calm

I love you so much .... Smile it off

When raging winds roar

Upon a million starry shores

After the solemn pair drifts away

Touching sands of white all remains

Through her soft hair the rhythm goes

A place of no drugs floats through

While a seeing eye presumes too much

Some calm seems to visit this temple

A soul accepting tears of the sun

Relaying the paradise of this mind

Another way to life mediates the tide

To welcome all the ravishing fruit

Kind in it's giving color it may fly

Holding a prayer for mercy upon his soul

A coconut recline in his beautiful eyes

Kissing away the tears to a Tahiti

She is the summering hour taking a stroll

Left if the egoistic tick of time 

Beyond the strings of wooden oak 

Behind the fluttering toes sand dilates 

Away you go into her peace

Calming the tame of regular sight  

Reviews

[Resa]

Very nicely written.
It takes your mind to a serene, peaceful, yet somewhat sad place.
Thank you for sharing
Resa. :)

[B]

Thank you resa :)

[ROXANE DORSEY]

NICE THANKS FOR SHARING YOU TALENTS.

[B]

Thank you 😊

[sonnie ibadah]

"She is the summering hour taking a stroll
Left if the egoistic tick of time...." this line and the image drove it home for me. i love this

[B]

Thank you Dear Sonnie

[Einstein Noodle]

meditative, mystical and serene in the reading ... you know how i enjoy this style of yours ..especially like the pairing of wind, stars and tides .. and "A coconut recline in his beautiful eyes" is delightful ... another keeper my friend!
E.

[B]

Thank you E

[JT Godin]

Again, positive message, and positive direction.

[B]

Thank you so much

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Very beautiful and calm. After reading i feel so happy. Well done.

[B]

Thank you so much

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You wellcome . I realy like it.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I do believe my toes have sand between them, and I desperately thirst for a drink with an umbrella in it! A most lovely repose, destined to transport the calmest of muses!

[B]

Thank you so much Kelly .... blushing here

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the euphoric joy of your avatar - balloons and the beach, what a thrill!

[B]

Thank you so much

[andrew mitchell]

this definitely had a south pacific island feel captured nicely through verse and the photo helps.

[B]

I went to Australia yesterday for half an hour
Tried to imagine how it would feel to be there
and this came out

thanks Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

30 minutes to see australia

[B]

lol ... and who said we need planes lol

[wordman]

a touching write,really enjoyed

[B]

Thanks Wordman

[H.L. Cerveise]

I really love this poem. It is relaxing to me just to read it as I think what turmoil I feel in my live at times and seeing the peace you have in this writing brings me piece in return.

Well Done.

[B]

Thanks HL ............