Positive Intervention

When someone simply pulls all the plugs

Offending every part of you 

Unjustly

Believing his notations

You play along

Just to learn how far he will go 

With ludicrous accusations

You have one form of positive intervention

You pack up

and leave

For good 

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[A.marie.speaks]

Sounds familiar. I have definitely been there! Your wording is wonderful, as always. Great work!

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[jesserose99]

strength I feel in you nirseen and I have felt it in your poetry before this is not the first time, and I am sure it won't be the last. When someone doesn't play ball fairly, and plays only with himself, then he deserves to get the field all alone! After all isn't that what he is asking for without coming straight out and saying it. Pulling the plug for your own good absolutely can be a positive thing!

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[dan]

Fielding accusations hardly seems part of a positive intervention, seems pretty negative to me. But if making accusations is what the accuser considers positive feedback, then the bar is set. It's either accept it and remain beaten down or get out. Your piece ends remarkably; "You pack up and leave for good." Very wise way to cut a problem off at the knees, and a very nicely written piece, Nisreen. take care...dan

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[Wannabewriter16]

I can relate to this very well Again I love the way that you write your stuff!!

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[zaisham9393]

This was awesome Nisreen. Many can relate. Thank You for sharing :)!!

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[CA Anurag Sharma]

It is a lesson... nice work... short and sweet :)

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Thank you Anurag

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

That's the spirit, Nisreen. Life is to short to waste on such things. :) Rudi

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[KWP]

:) nice - and adios amigo XX

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[Emily]

I love it!
So many poeple can relate to it.
Keep on writing!!

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[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"You pack up
and leave
For good "
Sometime the escape is the only option. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.