Positive Intervention

When someone simply pulls all the plugs

Offending every part of you 

Unjustly

Believing his notations

You play along

Just to learn how far he will go 

With ludicrous accusations

You have one form of positive intervention

You pack up

and leave

For good 

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Every action has a reaction and self-preservation is paramount. Nice write with an important reminder.

[Perkele.7885]

Before you leave for good; just how far did he actually go before our Nisreen finally said, "enough is enough"?

[B]

i guess my heart could never get me to say that
so i remain
but things get better

[Perkele.7885]

My eyes need Nisreen as does my heart to freshen my poetic world! So remain my chickadee and write some more lovely poems for others and for me!

[Olivia]

concise poem, with a good message

[B]

Thanks Olivia

[Terry O'Leary]

Good rules for living with others! Well written!!

[B]

Thank you Terry

[Sandra Nair]

Well-written lines. It's overwhelming!

[B]

Thank you Sandra

[Sandra Nair]

It's my pleasure, friend.

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Thank you.

[Ruth]

Or so one should...agree...it is paramount to have such self respect :)

[B]

Thank you Poppy

[Cassie]

Yes Nisreen, I tend to agree with the last line..when you get pushed to the wall too much, you finally pull free and go for good.

[B]

Thank you Cassie

[Perkele.7885]

Is Nisreen gone? Or just gone to me?

[B]

Nisreen is here Raj :)

[Perkele.7885]

This is so good to hear!.

[B]

I am glad to learn that :)

[Einstein Noodle]

power to the choice!!!! leaving such a situation is invigorating and self actualizing to the max .. your poem is so open ended i imagine lots of situations it applies to .. God bless us with strength, courage and choice!! :)
E.

[B]

Thank you E

[Mara]

alot said in a few words, great piece,
thank you for sharing:)

[B]

Thank you Tee