Some sort of principle

So much silence has sparked

The enviable

Inevitable start

Accepting shortcomings

For an angel heart

Some in probation

Others feed to fly

The lies we live with and for

To keep up

Some ice frozen on steel bars

Today a pretty day

No disappointments

Given no expectations

Nothing to hide

Or pushed to the side

Principle removed

And to no one's surprise

Rising for a solute nothingness 

Fallen for everything

Trying to hide 

Some none complacency 

Pushing things to the side

Beyond up

So cold within

And outside

Fire less logged onto a pile 

Until one more day passes by

You realized

Nothing to find

Fighting a piece of my mind

With no peace you confide

Confusing a careless motive

For a calm

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

"For an angel heart
Some in probation," this was such an awesome image!

[Terry O'Leary]

An interesting philosophy! Well expressed!

[Emily]

I like the layout of it!
Well done!
Keep on writing!

[Simon Welsh]

Always fighting a piece of my mind. Nice write.

[Cassie]

Ahaa..I felt like you were writing about me here Nisreen, You are such a fine writer so full of knowledge. God bless your pen

[Einstein Noodle]

you pack a lot in your poems always ... first three couplets for me are most powerful .. i send my 5 grown children a Dad's Corner every now and then and the most recent was about taking the idiosyncratic oath ;) it means when we are friends enough to know the irksome idiosyncrasies of those friends, co-workers, lovers mates etc. we decide if we will accept them and have peace or reject them, and create our own anxiety, frustration and anger within our selves ... perhaps without even trying to talk it over and work things out .. the middle reminds me of all the barriers we build and maintain as a result of "small things" really .. and in closing is a person (maybe me;) who decides to bury things so deep the lie is to the self .. very thought provoking and always amazing, unique use of words Nisreen!
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem dear Poet.
"With no peace you confide
Confusing a careless motive"
You left the reader with more questions than answers. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jesserose99]

What a lovely way of expressing your thoughts you have. I truly love the way you write.."for an angel heart, some in probation' how darn bitter sweet it is.

[Wannabewriter16]

What a lovely way you have expressed this. I sternly could not have done it like you!

[A.marie.speaks]

I love the couplets. You have such a great way of stringing each together. This poem hits home to me, I could really relate. Most people have just accepted the way things are and so not want to fight to make them different or better.. confusing a carless motive for a calm. Very real. Loved it