This is wonderful :) Melted my heart and it's not even about me lol. Such a sweet poem about a loved one. Whoever he is, he is very lucky to have you! I'm glad he makes you so happy to write such pretty works such as this ^_^ Thank you very much for sharing this with me :D
This poem is so cute and lovely, the small phrases definitely increase the flow throughout the piece, yet allow the reader to quickly absorb the loving nature between the speaker and the one being spoken to.
Great tone and mood as well :)
Where's my cup? :p hahaha
These words made me smile, mission accomplished.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Visit Andrew Mitchell's work
The smiles are there
I am simply just shining light on th.. read moreVisit Andrew Mitchell's work
The smiles are there
I am simply just shining light on the obvious
I missed this write somehow it never showed and I'm honoured I bring a little smile or happiness to your life for a moment and maybe longer as you do to me from your writes and others who are most respected ,admired and adored by me. I'm so lucky I found such a wonderful group of friends including you and your special unique writes which we all love to share and read :):)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I am lucky too ..... All feelings are very much mutual my dear friend .....
9 Years Ago
Thanks I'm very touched and glad but many fine writers are there on wc worthy of this title who like.. read moreThanks I'm very touched and glad but many fine writers are there on wc worthy of this title who like me are with you all the way on your poet's journey!! :):)
Just trying to make you feel the way you made me feel .....
9 Years Ago
I'm very touched thank you my friend:) x
9 Years Ago
Try to show up for this world poetry open mic www.worldpoetryopenmic.net
8 pm mountain time ... read moreTry to show up for this world poetry open mic www.worldpoetryopenmic.net
8 pm mountain time .... And you can post up your work on the group here on WC
I am sure your work would be the talk of the night .....