Linked Love

A surprise happened causing me to make this poem

Love is linked in a way
Just to write it makes me say
No
I hate you, you are hated
If you wont then I will state it
I'm not trying to make you feel bad
You did it to yourself, I don't feel sad
It's the truth and I must say
I hate you but is that ok?
Will that make you feel any worse?
Or, ever, ever make you curse?
Or will you like it so much?
Will you eat it for lunch?
That is not what the poem's about
It's so much more that I need to shout
No
I thought it was over and done
But love is linked in more than one
It's a web of fate of which I own
It's much more stronger than any bone
A line of web I did not know
It came to me like in a show
A surprise it took alot at me
It was very difficult to see
But if things go way too far and much
I will stop them eating me as lunch
by saying
No
Love is linked in a way
That no matter what I say
Will not change these webs of fate
All will be as it will state
And all I can say
In the most powerful way
is
No

Reviews

[JW]

This is really good, it shows how everything is intermingled and everything has a chain reaction.