Little muse

Little muse

A Poem by Ethan Castner

if only if only i had a muse
oh whats inside i can not use
wrinkled, dusty withered bones
i look around and I'm alone
if only if only i had one for me
oh then the world would finally see
sitting beautifully upon the shelf
giving such inspirational help
so please, little muse, wherever you are
come help me work
i know your not far

© 2010 Ethan Castner


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Ethan Castner
i was thinking, i wish i had a muse of my own, then this came to my mind, so here it is! tell me what you thing

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You are a muse!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Music from the hammer of a blacksmith.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Really like it! I think that perhaps some punctuation would make this a bit stronger (distracting for me, as I'm a grammar freak c:), but this was nicely done. Great rhyme scheme and end. :)

-Coral-

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Kes
This is perfect. Every artist needs a muse, and not many have one. Only the best...
Funnily enough, most of my musical inspiration comes from my favourite band... They're called MUSE.
Xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think it is wonderful..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short and sweet poem - nice thought too


Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha my bro kidnapped the muses! But I like this a lot, its beautiful in my point of view!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Ethan Castner
Ethan Castner

Gig Harbor, WA



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Hello there, My name is Ethan Castner and i like to write.....well i try to write that is. I think im pretty funny, i can tell stories for hours on end. I know my writing skills are horrible, but that.. more..

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