No good deed goes unnoticed.

again another thing from the depths of my thoughts.

"look inside
then thou shall see
all the demons inside of thee
but hold still, look a little deeper
thy soul does not belong to the Keeper
He puts us through thick and thin
so finally when we meet again
he shall show us all, the one above
the messages that which he put forth from love
and show what we have learned
but if you flinch and you shy away
you will not live yet another day
no more sweet sweet breath
but only malice in thy heart
so listen here and listen good
live thy life for love and good
help thyself and help thy neighbor
help whoever asks a favor
all good deeds never go unnoticed
do good things and good thing shall, and will happen."

Author's Note

sorry for the thy and thou's....they just came out like that. but review it and tell me what you think! be honest! please

Reviews

[Aven]

a bit more informal language would give this a lift I think (referring to thy and thou) but this is an incredible poem... the message really shines through!