Do you ever...?

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Do you ever

                   Wonder

If there is more

To it than

This?

 

Do you ever

                   Question

The sun? Or

The stars? Or

Normal?

 

Do you ever

                   Realize

That things were

Broken

Once you fix them?

 

Do you ever

                   Dare

To defy

Reason?

Gravity?

Structue?

 

Do you ever

                   Try

To get out

Of the box

With the chains

And shackles

And locks?

 

Do you ever

                  Think

Without doubt?

Without substance?

Without motive?

 

I do.

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

Really well done! Striking in its form, and very thoughtful! You almost don't need the "I do" at the end--it is implied in every stanza--Lovely write!

[Carrollann]

Very creative, I haven't seen too many who structure their language in such a way. Visually interesting to read. I enjoyed it.