In Control

In Control

A Poem by Hannavas R.
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A short poem about being in control.

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Do you want to know something?

It's like,

I'm in an art gallary.


Where they tell you,

Not to touch the paintings.


But,

I feel as if my finger tips,

Are all over them.

© 2013 Hannavas R.


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Wonderful write.
The feeling of finger tips over the paintings may suggest your merger with them through mind,

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannavas R.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are always welcome.
Was the feeling of isolation the muse of the work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hannavas R.

11 Years Ago

o.o Actually... yes, it was.

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Added on September 12, 2013
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Tags: control, calm, smart ass, art, gallery, art gallery, poem, short

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Hannavas R.
Hannavas R.

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I am a 16 year old fantasy and romance reader and mostly short story writer, though I also write gay and lesbian, autobiographies, poems, novels, teen and young adult, and strictly adult. I'm silly.. more..

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