Love Is The Opaque Eye

100 feet up, Capillary sews herself shut
Then undresses for the moons.
Bluebirds, show her wings, her path
Her jump. 

Capillary lays bleeding
Melted wax and all.
But love is the journey, the opaque eye,
The fatal fall.

Star crossed, fucked, and broken boned;
Forever at last.
They lay motionless
As society replies. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[FateDictates]

Felt like I was about to bungee..nice work..

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Very very interesting piece. I love your choice of words, they paint pictures. Absolutely brilliant. The last stanza, I think, is the most powerful.