My Love, Stained By Blood

Warning for violent description.

My Love, Stained By Blood

I just want to wrap my hands around your throat,

Know that as you choke

And plead for breath

It is entirely my doing;

My nails in your skin,

My palms against your pulse,

My eyes that you're staring into.

I just want to stop the beating of your heart

Slowly, so I can feel it

And you can feel it;

The life draining slowly from your eyes

As your strength fades,

As you slow

And finally come to a peaceful still.

I want to drown you in the River Thames

With both hands in your hair,

Clutching thick locks as you thrash.

Underwater screams echo

In no one's ears but your own

But I can feel them through my touch

And we both know we both love it.

I want to guard you with my life,

A loyal dog

And frightful beast.

I want to stop the pain as you bleed out,

Caught between pressing your wounds shut

And tearing open the throat of the one

Who dares to hurt you.

I love you more than I can say

And I know you feel the same.

No one else would spend their dying moments lost in their lover's eyes;

As your life goes mine follows.

I wouldn't allow the privilege

Of a slow and loving death

To anyone but you,

My Dear.

Reviews

[Sarah Redigan]

Really dark and kinda terrifying everyones worst fear

[justjenn_2u]

Raw and honest. I love the emotion in this piece. A first review of your work and I plan to be back for more. Write on.....

[Cathy Wattam]

This is very well written. I like the slight change of direction and meaning. It makes for uncomfortable reading but why should the reader have it easy? Great, keep it going ;-)

[Renée]

Wow ! Well..heavy..dark, but I get it ! And its Very Good ! ..Wow.. I think...you must have listened to HIM ( ;