scribbles in the sand

scribbles in the sand

A Poem by Breathing So Quiet You'll Think I'm Dead.

11/01/07

 Scribbles

We write scribbles in the sand
that only you and I can understand.
I didn't think that I would feel this way about you, but since you've been gone my feelings have become so strong. Do we really have to wait this long?

  Memories of my past hurt so much the put my heart in a permanent cast,but you have cared for me so dearly its making my heart shine through the cracks...
Maybe my heart will heal at last.

  Nothing else matters but these scribbles in the sand, they may not matter to others but to me its what i understand.
 If they would just take a closer look they would see that there is a beautiful message behind the coarse lines.
  You showed me love,you gave me your hand, and showed me how to write these beautiful scribbles in the sand.

  I had a dream that you were still here and you could see  my tears, you hugged me so tightly , you made all my fears disappear.

  I hope you know I'm scared to death, but i've had this feeling since you left.
I need to put these thoughts to rest.

So Baby let me write these scribbles on your hand hoping to touch your heart b/c without you mine would fall apart.

So lets put our love to the test,
I'll scribble on your heart, you'll scribble on mine.
we'll pretend that there is no end to our scribbles in the sand
 And we will walk forever hand in hand.

© 2008 Breathing So Quiet You'll Think I'm Dead.


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Breathing So Quiet You'll Think I'm Dead.
Breathing So Quiet You'll Think I'm Dead.

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