love beyond recognition

love beyond recognition

A Poem by Breathing So Quiet You'll Think I'm Dead.

Monday, May 21, 2007

Love Beyond Recognition
Current mood: indescribable

There's nothing I can do,
Nothing I can say to make you
Change your mind this time.

 I don't know what to do,
I don't know what to say,
I can only pray that you understand
Why I feel this way.

 I want you here with me,
Every moment ,Every Breathe
Untill our final days of death.

I want you to see what you're doing to me
Everytime i hear your voice
    I get goosebumps.
Everytime you say "I Love you"
     I get weak in the knees.
I just don't know how you do this to me.

Looking at your pictures
Wondering what went wrong...
Now i realize it was you all along.

I'm choking on these words
I want to tell you how I feel so bad
I want to scream!

  There's nothing I can do,
There's nothing I can say
To make you change your mind this time.
   I don't know what to do,
I don't know what to say
I can only pray that you'll understand
Why I feel this way.

   Maybe if i ripped apart your heart
Tore it beyond recognition
Maybe then you would feel
The same condition I'm in.

You're the only one that can give me
The feeling that I've been dying for.
So please don't take away this feeling
I don't want to die anymore.

I see you walking away
I hope to god you  look back
And see me falling apart
I hope you change your mind
I swear we can have a new start.

 There's somethign I can do,
There's something I can say
To make you change  your mind
This time.
   I know what to do,
I know what to say.
    "I Love You , Please don't walk away"
I can only pray that you feel the same way....
  Do you feel the same way?
 

© 2008 Breathing So Quiet You'll Think I'm Dead.


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Breathing So Quiet You'll Think I'm Dead.
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