Serenity

I need a keyboard
I need a day

In and with which I will recover my mind...
                                 recover my sanity...
                                 recover my meaning....


I need a prayer
I need some comforting words


That I can carry near my heart and know somebody's waiting-
                                      waiting for me to get home...
                                      waiting for me to come home....
                                      waiting for me to stay home, in their arms...

Reviews

[Bare trees]

Those are good examples of serenity. Both peaceful and cleansing to the soul. Nice thoughts.

[nigrum homonculus]

very well done. the writing style complements your wishful message in the peace. well done. you done well

[hunglikejesus]

waiting for your peace so they may have peace.

Sorry, I love this and it inspires me to write. I hope you're not insulted by my little creative licenses.

I've been reading a few of your pieces and I will write reviews for each once I get these thoughts outta my head that this piece has put there. You are extremely in touch and I wish that for myself. Some clarity also.

Very good emotional writing, which is my favorite.

[Chris]

Some very wish - full thoughts you've expressed... and quite well.