Just.

Pull back the curtain
her bare bones' abode.
This being will live
clouded from light. And
has since birth,
of a dynasty of neglect and hurt
Giving a one child
the hope she thought she'd get.

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

For such few words this poem has great depth and feel. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem create a sad vision. The description create a vision of a life of pain with the possibility of a better life. The poem could be expanded to tell more of this story. Good use of words made reader want to know more. A excellent poem.
Coyote