Thinking

Alone and despairing
Opinions blurring like an angry black fog
People pushing away
Locked in a timeless reverie
Thoughts swirling and depression deepening
An empty unfeeling abyss opening and sucking in
Small gathering of unreasonable views
Swirling
Getting deeper
Rising higher
Closing in on each other
So close, pushing hard away
But still unmoving
Going nowhere
Pushing and pulling and changing and crying
But locked with one another
In a cycle unbreakable

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

This piece is wonderfully penned. The feeling of a never ending battle dance comes to mind, neither opponent, or in some cases lover, gains or looses, yet they are always at war. Your words put forward a very real dichotomy that exists.

Great Ink!
Aaron

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. extremely expressive and vivid ... beautifully written ...
. a painful experience turned into exquisite poetry ...