Circle of Sight

There by the trees lies the river of life
my life, or your life
with perfect view of the sky

The sky that with grace
behaves such a way
that upon first sight
you've met a lovely wedded day

Day that bring joy
and days that bring pain
days just of beauty and
days just of same

The beauty here strikes with awe
in a wonderful majestic light
the sun and the stars
and the moon and the trees

Reviews

[Neon]

I love seeing someone as beautiful as you feel happy ... I enjoyed this poem. So much love, passion and the delightful moments you've picturized through the wonderful poem. All phrases're very beautiful and lovely just as same as you are ... so beautiful.

Keep on!

[Chris]

A woman needs stars in her eyes from time to time... hell, so does a man.

[Neon]

Ha! I gotta agree with his words. Well Said 'Chris'.