Napkin Note (5)

Napkin Note (5)

A Chapter by Pi Cee

Luck they say,
and in my simple moments
I say sure.
But we, keeper of my heart
are not just a stumbled upon passion
but destiny
in one of its brightest moments.


© 2013 Pi Cee


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Destiny has always been a subject for debate for me, I think it's a lot like religion, what do you believe? If you believe something long enough does it "become?"and then there is always the human equation, what do you think? Do you believe in Destiny? What is your opinion on that?

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this note, for it shows us the power and light of dedication, devotion as it pulsates from the heart spark. It also showes on line four that "we" is the embodiment of both the self and fate, synthesised. It shows that one has climbed past the zone of self doubt and is in firm control and understanding of their own emotional vibrancy and strings. Their song is their own and they know it now, allowing for the destiny to finally open up it's light upon the road and the soul to attach itself to it.

Nicely scribbled Spicee! =D

Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Pi Cee
Pi Cee

Parkersburg, WV



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