In the Wind

The whispers,

of the lives

who forever

cannot be

intertwined

with

mine

"Goodbye"

Reviews

[Neon]

Oh my goodness .. I hate seeing someone as amazing as you say 'Goodbye' ...
Only the few lines made me numb to think ... How a beautiful angel feel so brightly in an incredible way. This shorty poem flattered me ... very magnificent poem. Your cool.

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

Epic! I've never read a piece of poetry so short, that leaves such an amazing feeling behind! =) You've got the sense of longing and sorrow mixed with the feeling of mysterious dream. At least that's what I get out of it! =) Love it!

Kate

[dawn aulis]

Very moving, makes me sad, and wishing I had the chance to know this person.