Napkin Note (26)

"Later,
under and with the sky
could we find the time
to embrace
and with a kiss
find the heart to cry?"

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

This note is deeper than most for me. For me it feels like a double sided coin of emotion. The first five lines tell a tale of love and closeness, then that is countered by the heart to cry. Why would there be tears if there was happiness a moment before?
Perhaps It's just me... I'm not seeing the reason for the crying?

=) Aaron

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

I like this... It's that moment when one needs the hug and kiss in order to unlock the buried emotions that need to spill out onto the shoulder of someone trustworthy. =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

a beautifully sublime note. A keeper for the scrapbook.