They Just Stand There

They Just Stand There

A Poem by Pi Cee

She's looking
Should I smile..

Does she remember

He's staring

I could never forget her

 I could get lost in those eyes...again


I think I really loved her

I really fell

Guess I really screwed things up

 My heart still jumps

I don't deserve a second chance

I've cried enough


And Stare


© 2012 Pi Cee


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clever and intriguing work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

brilliant, duo inner dialogue so true to form. I love how you set this up to converge at the bottom and stare,

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome effect with the layout of this one! It reminds me of a scene out of some anime. Very cool!
Yet, in reality, this in when an earthquake is supposed to happen, vaulting them into each others arms! Thus... problem solved! =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Pi Cee
Pi Cee

Parkersburg, WV



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