Everyday

Nobody, in the
                      whole
                                wide
    world
can give me
                  anything
                               close
 to what you did tonight.

Nobody, anywhere
                            can make       feel
     me
                         anything
  close
                              to what you did tonight
Nobody, in any
                      universe
           can
                  love
                         me
       like
             you
                    do
         everyday

Reviews

[Xanthous Crow]

The structure of this is odd, the way you placed it, but that is a good thing. It stands out from the bland top-down construction. It reminds me faintly of a hurricane, as does the emotional content of this poem. Affection, love, happiness. They're very present here. Feelings are fleeting, but I'm glad you've found love.

[quinfinn]

beautiful and intensely loving....i adore this

[Pi Cee]

Why thank you sir, I always love to see you stop by. =)

[quinfinn]

:)

[quinfinn]

feel free to r/r me

[Wolfwind]

This piece's flow reminds me of someone spinning around in happiness. The words tell us of a love that is powerful that means much to the writer. I hope that finding such a person issues in a new and joyous part of life. Everyone deserves such things. I'm glad you've found that. Nice poem!

Aaron

[Pi Cee]

Found it? I happened upon it. ;)

[Wolfwind]

Oh! =) Was it sitting upon a tree stump or under a stone? ;) Or perhaps you spied in while riding rainbows in the clouds! :D

[Pi Cee]

Well I have had plenty of skittles lately! ;)

[Wolfwind]

=D I haven't had skittles in forever! But I'm sure they still have the magical ability to make rainbows appear! ;p

[Pi Cee]

Sure do! =)