You Stop

You stop to take a look around
pause for a breath you find in my air.
You take your time to look around
showering me in pretty words and made up dreams.

You stop to take little pieces of me
pause for time, to gather them up bit by bit.
You take your time to cry fake tears
showering me in hopes and pretty words of made up dreams.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sounds like a parent talking to their child trying to put them at ease after life has let them down. I found this sentimentally sweet.

[kelvin]

my opinion here is sound like someone reading or feeling you out testing you to see what ticks or clicks and feed your ego and hopes with false dreams this is a read that makes you think whats going on here nicely written keep writing fellow writer