Once Upon A Midnight Song

I heard your voice
and I felt you love.

Author's Note

There is no error with the second 'you'. 'Tis meant to be.

Reviews

[kelvin]

could this be the love of god talking to you or a loved one talking to you and you feel the warm feeling of another towards yourself this voice could be virtually anybody so few words but it says so much in feeling nicely written fellow writer

[Wolfwind]

A knocking came upon the door. A whisper drifting in upon the ear. A smile rises as love is known with know disguises. =)

[Steeven]

the you actually makes this poem. i think any change such as 'your' or 'loving' would make it too definitive, linear. the way it is gives a varied emotion each time it's read. perfectly played. thank you