Let's Hold Hands

love holds the hand of time
with whichever you meet first,
the other is sure to follow.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the deep thoughts in this poem.

[Pi Cee]

So do I.
Thanks for the review.

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling...

[Pi Cee]

Smiles always make the best of friends

[Sami Khalil]

Anf flattering , too. LOl

[Pi Cee]

Mhmm. With big smiles, the kind that you're laughing silently but you still can't breathe quite right so you don't care if your braces show. ;)

[Sami Khalil]

:D

[quinfinn]

i suspect this goes far deeper than most would perceive, but it went where you intended, which is what makes it special. one could fall forever through the portal you have opened here, if they have a huge heart and an open mind. exquisite!

[Pi Cee]

Thank you, so very much for stopping to read a few things. I greatly appreciate it, especially since you stopped to comment. =)

[quinfinn]

i always have something to say when i am impressed. what some people see as simplistic is often much more substantial than they allow themselves to see. there is a depth to your style that is almost concealed by the brevity of the pieces.....almost....to the blind and shallow.

[Pi Cee]

Then I'm glad you've picked up on my not so secretly hidden secrets. ;)

[quinfinn]

not bad.....not bad at all

[Pi Cee]

Not good, not good at all. Just real.

[quinfinn]

yeh, there's that, too

[Pi Cee]

Heh =)

[quinfinn]

it has been a pleasure chatting with you, i must log off now, back in a week!

[Pi Cee]

As I've found pleasure too, see ya back here in a week I guess. =}

[quinfinn]

certainly

[Wolfwind]

I like this. The idea is a wonderfully positive one, that brings through the manifestation of a bright future. Much Enjoyed!

Aaron =)