Losing Myself

I'm losing my sight-
my eyes are almost blind.

I'm losing my speech-
my mouth can barely speak.

I'm losing my mind,
am I yet out of time?

Reviews

[Megan Simpson]

It's very to the point, yet it makes you think. Nice work.

[quinfinn]

ah yes, the eternal questions of the human race, so many reasons to feel this and so many different ways to do so...well done pi cee

[Persephone]

Short poem, but it says a lot - I like your rhyming scheme and the rhythm here - I enjoyed it :)

[Invisible]

who knows, these questions are what drive us mad the most i think, ;)

[Pi Cee]

Most definitely.

[Invisible]

yep :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

This is a good write as it can be taken in so many ways, desperation, depression, humor and on and on...I am a Libra so I see all the sides to things, ok maybe it's just my mind either way...I love this! It reminds me of how I feel right before bed and also when I wake up!

[Pi Cee]

=) Haha, thank you!

[Wolfwind]

Nope, not loosing one's mind... Sounds like one has had just to much caffeine! =)

[Pi Cee]

I've refrained from my coffee for a full two days! Thank yo very much ;)

[Wolfwind]

Oh... in that case...was it the chocolate? ;)

[Pi Cee]

Nope, probably just the bag of sour gummy worms... ;p

[Wolfwind]

lol! Awesome! =)

[Pi Cee]

XD

[Tai Ryens]

Vague, and loose for any and every reader to interpret in his/her own unique way. Though it sounds like it, I sense that this is in no way straightforward. Nonetheless, I enjoyed well. I applaud this poem.