I'll Stand Back, Not Make a Scene

To be heard, to be hurt
you can only see me.

I take a walk along a creek
to feel free among the air,
I'll stop to sing a melody,
flash a smile to weeds.

Bring back all those used-to-likes,
shut my mouth upon the touch of wind.
Breathe in the scents of a summer breeze,
graze a tree's hand, look up to the sky.

In all fairy-tales, there is only one end.
Happily ever after, to a night's long dream.

Reviews

[Tera Faithel]

Such a well written poem, inspiring too. Your a great writer!

[Pi Cee]

Thank you! =)

[Chris]

...and life is seldom a fairy tale...

Sigh, yeah - I understand

[Invisible]

i kinda like it.

[The Watcher]

I find this to be very touching and vivid. It's so peaceful and connected to nature, and all well written as well. Wonderful write Pi, and kudos

[Pi Cee]

You can call me Bri.

[Wolfwind]

I liked the flow of your words. They spoke to me of many things, some good, some bad, perhaps a balance. There is a level of loneliness that is woven in, and walking memory lane. Natures only friend, perhaps... And then the dream that always ends at morning light.
Kinda a somber sad piece, but spoken with a aura of peace.

Great Ink!
Aaron

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A dreamy serene breath of fresh air :) Very nice!

[Pi Cee]

Thank you =)

[hunglikejesus]

this one escapes me though tempo did not. I won't ask you to explain it because that would defeat the purpose me thinks. I'll read it a bit more.

Very good.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

To really live we must take chances, and with those chances comes risk... it would be nice to have life be like a fairy tale expect the fact that then we wouldn't be able to appreciate the good things that come to us.

[Pi Cee]

Is there a good without bad? Would everything just be numb without the difference? Or would indifference step down to what a normal world considers bad? -Thought Bubbles-

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

All great questions. I do think it is true that if that if everything were easy we wouldn't appreciate anything and life would be boring.