The consequence of the Apple

The foggy haze of smoke has cleared

No bong No wrong

Just empty beers

We've lost it all

Gained nothing back

We've just got each other and the Rack

Reviews

[Alexander Mccarthey]

Thanks meg. I'll admit I'm not as much of a poet as I am a short story writer. I think what I was really trying to do was add the dissociative tone that the 'apple' adds to individuals lives.

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Simple yet carries meaning. It seems like you're saying what you have to say and you lack the emotion that you have behind it all. maybe that was your intention all along, I can't be sure.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The Apples indeed, a planet that starts within the most perverse signal there is, us!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting. I love the first line; and the title... which caught my attention.

[Raven Starhawk]

Another great poem. I like how easy it slips into life.

[joshua deathdealer]

Great work. Short but to the point...I like the last line a lot..xx