Heart to Heart

Heart to Heart

A Poem by Alexander Mccarthey

sometimes you can't swim
When we sink into the heart of those depths
When we no longer see the light of day
Stay Strong
Everything may be taken away
Your Heart
Your Home
But nothing is really taken 
nothing is really destroyed
In truth those pieces of our loss are truly real
Inside of each one of us
Our hearts 
Our Minds
Let them shine and burst
Let them become the firework within you

© 2011 Alexander Mccarthey


Author's Note

Alexander Mccarthey
just a quick note I wrote it on a cocktail napkin while waiting tables

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Boy, have I DONE THAT A TIME OR 2!!...thank god for ANYTHING to write on!! I EVEN HAD TO WRITE...on the side of the freeway..tryna fix a flat tire. That muse...when she says,"write"...we can do nothing else.From hopelessness, to resolve. Shows character..I likes it..
masqued_muse^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's a good poem because of the insight behind it. You know your stuff.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Our Hearts, Our Minds, let them chine and burst let them become the firework withing you. That's a brilliant tid-bit right there. When Lady Muse commands, you must obey, it's the one weakness of an artist, because only we know how fleeting a muse can be. Brilliant write, and wonderful depth to the words. Alas, great inspiration comes when you least expect it.

Good Job

~Rose

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Wonderful. Strong inspirations catches us unaware so many times. I once wrote a poem on my mobile while in a bus. Haha.
A beautiful poem indeed. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow.. Love it!! For writing this on a napkin while waiting tables, its fantastic! It would be so cool to see a poem written on a napkin at a restaurant. It's like ooo, this is interesting. =D I enjoyed reading this. =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DUYk1OpZlk&feature=feedf

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a very inspirational write. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Boy, have I DONE THAT A TIME OR 2!!...thank god for ANYTHING to write on!! I EVEN HAD TO WRITE...on the side of the freeway..tryna fix a flat tire. That muse...when she says,"write"...we can do nothing else.From hopelessness, to resolve. Shows character..I likes it..
masqued_muse^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoy quick thoughts of the mind....Hello...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree that about the last two lines, though that isn't to say the rest of the poem isn't just as good. It's beautiful. c:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alexander Mccarthey
Alexander Mccarthey

Tucson, AZ



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