The Place

The Place

A Poem by Ashley

Many places I do not know
Many places but no place to go
I am stuck in a world where nothing's what it seems
Everything seems just like my dreams

The place I see but cannot find
Is always there on my mind
On the edge of the place
The place that I cannot face

No, it's not a place outside
It's the place where I can't hide
No, not here at my home
Where I sit all alone

The place is where you can't see
Somewhere that I can flee
Not a place that you can find
You see this place is in my mind

© 2008 Ashley


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There's a strange paradox in the metaphoric sense of the word 'the place' in your poem. More like a surreal destination that though needs to be attained but is never reached.

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Added on February 23, 2008
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