SUMING UP-2

The Destiny we never knew would happen.

Chapter-3
"You excited for your 1st day in New school honey"
"Maybe mom, Iam not sure"
"Ever things gonna be fine, don't let the past hunt you dear"
I have been trying to not let it hunt me by keeping all of it inside me.... I dont know when is it gonna burst....
I hope it won't cause this is a new life filled with so many hopes for me.
I was standing in front of my gate waiting for the school bus, when I saw Mark waiting there too I understood we were in the same school, I waved a hi towards him
He ignored:(
Never mind.
When we boarded the bus I tried to find a seat, well there was one near Mark but ofc he kept his bag on the other seat before I could sit.
Rude person.
*reaches school*
The head mistress was really a good woman, took me to my new class, when I was being introduced I noticed Mark in that class too, I smiled at him but got ignored again.
I found a seat almost near to him and Said him hi.
I got a new friend in school too serene....
All of this sounds boring, the real matter is that something bout mark got me attracted to him, I was confused about him. Maybe some where a small amount of crush might have started building up.

Chapter-4
Each from then I always said Mark hi but he ignored as usual
I liked him ignoring it in a way🌼
I always made lame excuses to my mom to go to his house, I would end meeting his mom, but after some time he didn't mind me coming to his house....... for the next few days miss sue and mark were not there in their house it seemed like they had gone somewhere.
It was weird having nobody in the morning to say hello at the usual spot¤.
From school I heard Anthony marks best friend saying students that marks conditioned has worsened and was taken to the hospital. I was struck for a moment, I felt a cold vibe running through me.
That evening when I reached home mom said that susette and her son is back.
I felt relieved at ths moment and waited until the next day to meet him.
Next morning, he was standing at the usual spot, I looked at him and Said hi.. I was ready for my usual getting ignored system... BUT HE SAID "HEY, "and smiled at me☆
I couldn't believe, but I believed th a somewhere he changed into some else in those few days when he was away.
I asked him "where did you go for a few days"
"We um we went to see my nana"
Ofc I knew he was lying but I played along.
"I could help you with school this evening of you don't mind"
"Yea sure that would be great"
Now I liked him even more..... I must be losing my mind☆

Author's Note

Put up reviews on what you think about his so that I can improve if I have made any mistakes. ♡

Reviews

[Aly]

Suming up is off to a good start. I like your idea of a character drawn to someone who is closing themselves off from everyone, and everything. It's a situation ripe with conflict that begs for a sweet ending. Try adding more description of places and or the weather it will help to create a mood, and will provide a background to your story.

[Kazete Roze]

Thanks, that was actually helpful.... I will really try to do as

[lakki]

I wonder what made him change his temper this quick.