Don't Quit

Don't Quit

When things go wrong as they sometimes will.
When the road you’re trudging seems all up hill.
When funds are low and the debts are high.
And you want to smile, but you have to sigh.
When care is pressing you down a bit.
Rest, if you must, but don’t you quit.
Life is queer with its twists and turns.
As everyone of us sometimes learns.
And many a failure turns about.
When he might have won had he stuck it out:
Don’t give up though the pace seems slow �"
You may succeed with another blow.
Success is failure turned inside out �"
The silver tint of the clouds of doubt
And you never can tell how close you are.
It may be near when it seems so far:
So stick to the fight when you’re hardest hit �"
It’s when things seem worst that you must not quit.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this, especially the last two lines "So stick to the fight when you're hardest hit...It's when things seem worst that you must not quit." This is very true, we may come along hard times but that doesn't mean we have to give up there are reasons why we have struggles and obstacles. I also liked the flow of your words.

Great Job

[Phoenix]

Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem...:)

[Phoenix]

thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Don't quit...a simple suggestion with a difficult execution. I find truth in your words; a hopeful sort of thing that helps my own soul, which has been slightly battered as of late. "So stick to the fight..."--strong.

[Phoenix]

Thank you