In Memory of My Dad

Pain stuffed inside of me

Can't let anyone near me

Can't let anyone see the real me

Can't let anyone even hug me

 

All this pain that's held in me

Why can't anyone see the real me

Why can't anyone help me

Why can't someone just hold me

 

All this pain that's eating me

Can't let go of the pain in me

Can't get this pain from me

Can't get this pain out of me

 

When will the pain stop hurting me

Why can't I just feel me

Why can't I just be me

Why can't someone take this pain from me

Reviews

[gcp]

I like the rhythm created by the single vs three line structure - works well :)